Too Much Description
Prof. Katz points out
that students often make the mistake, however
good their intentions may be, of simply describing
something when they are actually asked to
analyze. Prof. Walters notes that when
a student's answer consists only of
the reiterated question or a description of
information, instead of analysis, she
often thinks that the student either doesn't
understand the question or doesn't have the
information to answer it.
While it is still important
to repeat key words from the question
in your thesis, in the rest of your
response, you should be careful that you
are not just repeating the question or giving
a description of what the question already
addresses. Sometimes it may be difficult to
gauge how much reiteration is too much. For
that reason, Prof. Clark advises students
to take the question apart to see if it has
been answered fully, because ultimately the
goal of your essay or short answer should
be to successfully answer the question.