Weak Paragraph Transitions
It's often hard for writers to
construct smooth transitions from one paragraph
to the next. Good transitions, along with most
structural elements of an essay, tend to be
the result of continuous and careful revision.
Sometimes it just takes practice. Paragraph
transitions are a crucial part of paragraph
structure because they can make the difference
between an essay that reads smoothly and coherently
and one that seems choppy and confusing.
Sometimes the problem is not that
you haven't used transitions but that the transitions
sound forced or are inappropriate to the content.
As Prof. Clark notes, often with shorter assignments,
the paragraphs seem to flow better because
the essay is much more direct and to-the-point.
You can achieve the same results in longer writing
assignments if you understand how the relationship
the paragraphs have to your thesis and to each
other.