Use of Personal Opinions
According to Prof. Sockett,
writers sometimes have a tendency to emphasize
personal opinions instead of analyzing the problem
presented. On the one hand, professors want
to see students become engaged with the ideas
learned in class, and reactions to ideas are
good, in the right context. On the other hand,
instructors such as Prof. Sockett and
Prof. Hart-Nibbrig say that reactions
in essays should not consist solely of your
personal "feelings," but should reflect
some understanding of the problem or how your
reaction relates to your careful analysis. Prof.
Hart-Nibbrig, in particular, notes that
writers should avoid beginning statements with
phrases like, "I feel" and instead,
simply present an argument that is based on
information previously introduced in the essay.
How you think and feel about the subject is
understood in the way you present your argument.
It is also important to realize
that professors are not asking you to completely
censor your personal reactions in essays, just
to avoid introducing opinions that have no supporting
evidence somewhere in the essay. You can also
learn to present your opinions objectively by
comparing them to the opinions of others, possibly
the scholars who have discussed your topic in
previous assigned readings. This strategy accomplishes
two things. First, it shows your professor that
you have been reading and that you understand
what you have read. Second, it demonstrates
to your instructor that you understand how your
own reaction compares to those of others and
that you are able to engage in a "dialogue"
with other scholars.