English Composition 101

Summer Session “C” 2007

 

Dr. Terry Myers Zawacki     tzawacki@gmu.edu

 

Office Hours: After class and by appt. 
Office: Robinson A 112a. Phone: 993-1187

Classroom: Innovation 328   Note: You will need to bring a disc(s) or flash drive to all classes.


English 101 is a general education course designed to prepare you for college writing and thinking with an emphasis on developing critical strategies for working with texts, including the lived "text" of everyday experience, and a habit of self-consciousness about your own and your peers’ thinking and writing. Course goals also include helping you to understand how audience and purpose shape writing, how to shape research questions that enable you to become a critical and effective researcher, how to integrate source material, how to summarize, quote, and paraphrase accurately and critically, and how to write effective and interesting prose.

The reading and writing we do in this course will be focused on the broad question of what it means to be an educated person at a time when our access to information is almost immediate and seemingly unlimited. This question leads to other, narrower questions that we will explore: What does it mean to be literate in this time and place? If we take this “place” to be college, what literate practices are expected of college students? What significant changes have occurred in your lifetime in the way “education” (yes, a very broad term) is conceived of, delivered, and assessed? As you consider responses to these questions in our short 5-week semester, you’ll be observing, defining, describing, narrating, and researching topics from your own life histories and from primary and secondary research. These are critical thinking skills that will be important to you as you progress through your college courses and into the workplace. As you write for college, you’ll be using all of these skills to greater or lesser degree depending upon your major. Because “correct” writing is one of the most important markers of a literate student for many of your professors, we will set aside time almost every class period for grammar discussions and exercises.  

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In an interview for Aurora Online, Neil Postman, communication/education theorist and the author of The Disappearance of Childhood, discusses the profound impact of the new technology of the printing press on people’s conception of adulthood after the 15th century.

We know, for instance, in the medieval world there was no such thing comparable to what we today call childhood. There were basically two stages of life: infancy and adulthood, with infancy ending at about the age of seven. … This form of social organization was the product of the kind of communication system that existed. That is to say, it was largely an oral culture in which most of the important social transactions occurred through speech in face-to-face situations. So in order to be an adult, one had to learn how to speak, which most people do by the age of seven.

In the sixteenth century, this began to change because the communication environment changed with the invention of the printing press. After the printing press, one had to earn adulthood by becoming literate. People are biologically programmed to learn how to speak, but they are not biologically programmed to be literate. This required the development of the modern school. And for the first time in centuries, a certain segment of the population was segregated from the rest of the population and sent to a special place, namely school, in order to learn how to become literate. After a while, the term schoolboy became synonymous with a certain age group, which developed into the idea of childhood—a special stage of life that was to act as a bridge between infancy and adulthood. (http://aurora.icaap.org/archive/postman.html)

If the printing press and subsequent emergence of schools as places to become literate created the idea of childhood in the 16th century, other, more recent educational and technological advances have challenged the way we think about and define literacy, education, schools as sites for learning, and even “childhood” itself as information of all kinds circulates widely and freely. All of the writing, reading, and research you’ll do in this 5-week semester will explore what it means to be a literate, educated person in our media-saturated, constantly evolving technological world. While this is the focus of the course, each of your assignments allows you to practice commonly used rhetorical patterns, e.g. narration, definition, illustration, comparison/contrast, for organizing and supporting your arguments. Each also asks you to employ critical thinking skills, including, for example, careful word choice, close observation, logical use of evidence, synthesis of ideas and information from multiple sources, analysis and evaluation of evidence and arguments.  

Required Texts: Lunsford, Andrea A. The St. Martin’s Handbook 6th Ed. (StM)  and http://bcs.bedfordstmartins.com/smhandbook6e/Player/index.aspx

Online Texts as noted under each week

Course Procedures:

· Course notebook—You’ll need a three-ring binder with sections for free writing, notes, reading log entries, and research notes. An alternative is a series of pocket folders.

· Daily AssignmentsAssignments are due on the day they are listed on the syllabus. Daily assignments, in-class writing, and exercises (we’ll do some grammar exercises almost every day so bring your textbook with to every class) generally may not be made up if you are absent.

· Four PapersImportant: Keep all drafts.

Paper One: Defining a term in context using scholarly tertiary and/or secondary and primary sources. Focusing question: What does it mean to be literate in this day and age? (See assignment below.) (Minimum 900 words; 15% of grade)

Paper Two: Conducting primary research: Interview someone at least 20 years older than you to explore one of the ways that person’s education at a particular point in his/her life has been different from your own at the same age. (Minimum 1200 words; 20% of grade) 

Paper Three: Conducting secondary research: What do you consider to be a significant educational change that has occurred in your life time? What would you like to know about that change? As you explore and narrow your topic, ask yourself what claims you want to make about the significance of the change you’re researching for readers who are college teachers and students. (Look at StM page 218 for example.) (Minimum 1500 words; 30% of grade)

Paper Four: Making an argument about college writing. For the final paper, you'll make an argument about yourself as a college-level writer. You'll define "college writing" based on what you have learned from this class, from your textbook, from other college courses you may have taken or from the descriptions of your high school teachers. Look also at the goals for English 101: http://english.gmu.edu/composition/faculty/goals100.php and the writing assessment rubrics found at: http://wac.gmu.edu/program/assessing/phase4.html#part3. Using this evidence and your own demonstrated abilities, you'll argue that you are a college-level writer. (Minimum 750 words; 10% of grade)


Participation
—English 101 is a workshop course, so I do little lecturing. Instead you’ll be working with each other in pairs, in groups, and in larger group discussions. Attendance and active participation are very important and constitute a large portion of your grade. As the university catalog makes clear, “students are expected to attend the class periods of the courses for which they register. In-class participation is important not only to the individual student, but to the class as a whole. Because class participation may be a factor in grading, instructors may use absence, tardiness, or early departure as de facto evidence of nonparticipation.” (See http://www.gmu.edu/catalog/apolicies/index.html#Anchor26.)

· Grading—Your final grade will be based on your achieving the course goals, with particular emphasis on your ability to write interesting and technically correct essays supported by primary and/or secondary research, and your thoughtful and regular participation. Approximate percentages are: papers and all accompanying work = 75%; other work (journals, in-class writing, writing exercises, contributions to class discussion, etc) = 25%. You will have the opportunity to revise two of your papers after a grade has been assigned. You must achieve at least a "C" grade in order to receive credit for the course. If your work is not at least a "C" average, you will earn an NC, which means No Credit and which does not affect your GPA.

· Late Papers: Papers are due at the beginning of the class period and automatically forfeit one-letter grade for each class period they are late. This includes papers put in my mailbox in lieu of your attending class. I will not accept a paper if I have not seen it through the drafting stages. In no case will I accept a paper handed in with the explanation that you changed your topic at the last minute because you could not find enough information on the topic you had been working on.

Statement on Plagiarism

Plagiarism means using the exact words, opinions, or factual information from another person without giving that person credit. Writers give credit through accepted documentation styles, such as parenthetical citation, footnotes, or endnotes; a simple listing of books and articles is not sufficient. Plagiarism is the equivalent of intellectual robbery and cannot be tolerated in an academic setting. Student writers are often confused as to what should be cited. Some think that only direct quotations need to be credited. While direct quotations do need citations, so do paraphrases and summaries of opinions or factual information formerly unknown to the writers or which the writers did not discover themselves. Exceptions for this include factual information which can be obtained from a variety of sources, the writers' own insights or findings from their own field research, and what has been termed common knowledge. What constitutes common knowledge can sometimes be precarious; what is common knowledge for one audience may not be so for another. In such situations, it is helpful, to keep the reader in mind and to think of citations as being "reader friendly." In other words, writers provide a citation for any piece of information that they think their readers might want to investigate further. Not only is this attitude considerate of readers, it will almost certainly ensure that writers will never be guilty of plagiarism. (statement of English Department at George Mason University)

Accommodations for Students with Disabilities: Students with documented disabilities are legally entitled to certain accommodations in the classroom.  If you have a documented disability, please contact me immediately.  (Disability Resource Center: 703-993-2472)

 

Useful URL’s

University Writing Center (for a variety of on-line handouts) – http://writingcenter.gmu.edu

GMU Library's "Help with Research" pages: http://library.gmu.edu/research/ and "Web Guides and Tools": http://library.gmu.edu/resources/web.html.

Tutorial in Using the Library: http://library.gmu.edu/training/webtut.

An array of useful research and ‘how to’ sites -- http://mason.gmu.edu/~montecin/resources.htm

Information on Turnitin.com and online tutorials on avoiding plagiarism: http://www.irc.gmu.edu/turnitin/resources.html

George Mason University Honor Code and Statement on Plagiarism-- http://www.gmu.edu/catalog/apolicies/index.html#Anchor12

English Department’s Information Technology Skills: http://www.gmu.edu/depts/english/composition/wits/

Online tutorials on Image Manipulation:

http://chss.gmu.edu/tac/workshops/image_fall03/studentresources.html (how to do just about anything with images and text)

http://classweb.gmu.edu/tec/image/Graphics%20Tutorial.html (how to capture images)

 

 

Tentative Weekly Progression.

Note: All assignments due on the day they are listed.

Week One

July 2: Introduction to course. Understanding the syllabus. Looking for definitions: What is college writing? What is critical thinking? Practicing paraphrasing and summarizing. In-class writing.

 

July 3:  Ways of seeing—cultural, social knowledge, and disciplinary knowledge. Ways of researching.  In-class primary research exercise. “Exploring” the writing center (writingcenter.gmu.edu). Assignment: Read “In the Laboratory with Aggassiz” at http://philosophy.lander.edu/intro/introbook2.1/x426.html and summarize in no more than five sentences. In a separate paragraph, explain what it shows about observing in context. Also read StM Chapters 1 and 2 on college writing and reading/writing/research and pages 275-277 and 281-287 on paraphrasing and summarizing and avoiding plagiarism. In log, note key things to remember about each topic.

July 4: No Class.

July 5: Defining concepts. Dictionaries and other popular and scholarly tertiary sources. Assignment: Read StM Chaps 29 and 30 on “Word Choice” and “Dictionaries, Vocabulary, and Spelling.” Also read "What Is College-level Writing?" at: http://www.ncte.org/pubs/chron/highlights/126797.htm. This article was written for teachers. Write: In 300-400 words, summarize the main ideas in the article for your peers in this class. Your purpose is to help them understand the significance of the question for teachers, both high school and college, and for students.  

 

Week Two

July 9: Defining concepts continued. Checking out the reference room: online and in Fenwick library. Assignment: Read: StM Chapters 3 and 5 on “Rhetorical Situations,” and “Exploring, Planning, Drafting,” and pages 66-68 on rhetorical strategies. Write: In preparation for paper one, free write on the meaning of one or more of the following terms: “literacy,” “education,” “school,” “schooling,” “reading,” “writing.” From your experience and/or observation, what do you think it means to be an educated person? A literate person? What literacy skills do you think are most important today? Feel free to think about these terms as broadly or narrowly as you would like. For example, you might want to talk about what “writing” means now, in e-spaces, on cell phones, on computers, or in other “alternative” spaces. Or about the writing you do for yourself as opposed to school audiences. Or about school as a site that was important or detrimental to your development as a reader/writer. Or about yourself as a reader and writer in other languages. For any/all of the words you’ve written about, you’ll describe an experience you have had or something you’ve observed that helps to illustrate your definition. Ultimately, you’ll focus on one term, examining dictionary definitions and how these connect (or not) to your own experience/observations.

July 10: Draft of Paper One due. Note: You may choose to include visuals (like photos, screen shots) in your text. If you do, please review the advice in StM chapter 4 on visual thinking. Assignment: Read StM chapters 6 and 29 on revising and editing and word choice.

 

July 11: Paper One Due. Begin work on Paper Two. Interviewing as research. We’ll read in class “Neil Postman: Stirring Up Trouble Stirring Up Trouble About Technology, Language, and Education” at http://aurora.icaap.org/index.php/aurora/article/view/62/74. We’ll be looking at interview strategies and also examining the scholarly credibility and/or authority of the site on which this interview appears. In this 1989 interview in Aurora, Postman argues that television and other visual media have contributed to the decline of literacy and intelligent thought. Now, eighteen years later, many still agree with him while also adding computers and the internet to his list. Postman suggests that “… in the next fifty years, those who will learn early and well to be literate will probably form some sort of elite, which has its good side and its bad side. No one likes to contemplate a culture in which there is kind of an elite priesthood that has access to special codes, namely print. It sounds like a prescription for an authoritarian culture to develop. What will be fifty years after that is very murky. I mean, it may be that in the end literacy will no longer be of any importance to the culture.” Do you agree with Postman that literacy, in the near future, will no longer be important? Or, based on how your definition of “literacy” or a related term in Paper One, do you think that the meaning of literacy has changed so dramatically in the last 18 years that Postman’s arguments are no longer relevant. Consider these questions when you conduct your interview for Paper Two.  

July 12: Using interviews as primary evidence. Organizing a comparison-contrast paper. Assignment: Interview someone who is at least 20 years older than you about some aspect of education that has changed dramatically from when your interview subject was your age. Listen and write down the information carefully. Tape if possible. Write your interview in Question and Answer format to turn in. Your transcript should contain a minimum of 700 words with your interviewee doing most of the talking. Read StM pages 244-248 on interviewing. Also read: For a good student model for paper two, read “War and Youth,” a paper written by Mariam Haider based on an interview with her mother about how different her youth in Iraq was from Mariam’s youth twenty years later. 

 Last day to drop: July 13

Week Three

July 16: Rough daft of Paper Two due. As with paper one, you should feel free to include visuals. Assignment: Read St.M Chapter 7 on “Paragraph Development. 

July 17: Paper two due. Brainstorming topics and preparing for research. What constitutes “research”? What is the difference between Google searching and searching the “deep web” through the databases available on the GMU library site? How does Google Scholar compare to academic search engines, such as those available on the Mason site? 

July 18: Research topic due with free writing. As you select your topic, consider first the changes that have been personally significant to you, those which have had an impact on your life. In other words, why do you care about this topic? Next think about why teachers and your fellow students would be interested in reading about this topic. Why should they care? Assignment: Read StM Chapters 12 and 13 on preparing for and conducting research. Also read the handout “Principles of Academic Research.”

July 19Compiling an annotated list of sources. Assignment: Read: StM Chapter 14 on evaluating and annotating sources. Write: Annotations for three sources you looked at. (Note: You are required to keep a research log on a disc or flash drive with names and annotations for all of your research sources.

 

Week Four

July 23: Annotated bibliography of all sources consulted due. Once you have narrowed your topic and  gathered your research, consider what information you will include in the paper. What is your purpose? What claims can you make? What sources, format, tone, and style will make your argument most persuasive to your academic readers? Assignment: Read StM Chapters 15 and 16 on integrating and acknowledging sources. For an example of how to synthesize information from both primary and secondary research, see “Things of Value,” an essay that integrates interview data with information from an article. Notice also the way the sources are introduced throughout the essay.

July 25 Research continued. Assignment: Read StM chapter 17 on writing a research project. Review the citation and documentation format chapter that is relevant to your major and/or that you prefer to use for this paper. (Chapter 18, 19, 20, or 21). Read sample research papers online at sites TBA. .

July 26: Rough draft of research paper due. As with your other papers, you should feel free to include visuals. You may also choose to submit the paper as a hypertext or web-based document. Should that be your choice, you will need to read chapter 24 on creating online texts.

Week Five

July 30 Research paper due. Preparation for paper four: Making a persuasive argument about the characteristics of college writing, in general and according to your major or intended major? Revisit the essay you wrote the first day of class. Has your assessment of yourself as a college writer changed? Have you met all or some of your writing goals?

July 31: Making persuasive arguments, cont. Writing effective sentences and memorable prose. Assignment: Read: StM chapters 9 and 11 on analyzing and constructing arguments. Also read chapters 42-45 on sentence style.

August 1: Last day of class. Draft of Paper Four due in hard copy to edit in class.

August 3: Exam day. There will not be an exam in this class. Instead you will turn in the final copy of paper four and an optional revision of one other paper with cover memo explaining why the paper merits a higher grade.  

What Final Grades Mean

A = work far exceeds minimum requirements, shows initiative, originality, intelligence, and well developed critical thinking and writing skills.

B = work exceeds minimum requirements, shows high quality critical thinking and writing skills.

C = work meets minimum requirements, shows effort and progress.

NC = work shows lack of basic skills and critical thinking. Writer did not adequately meet the goals and requirements for the course.

 Format for papers: Name and date in top right corner. No cover sheet or folder of any kind. Do not staple; use paper clip. Give paper a title. Double space. Proofread carefully. Make last minute corrections, if necessary, with black ink.

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Paper One: Stipulating a Working Definition of a Concept 

 

Background information:

One of the key components of critical thinking is to understand and be responsible for the words we use; being responsible means that we must strive for precision and clarity in our thinking and writing.  Simple dictionary definitions—lexical definitions--seek to specify a generally agreed upon meaning for words, whether those words are concrete or abstract.  But a dictionary definition does not begin to pin down all of the meanings individuals and groups of individuals bring to their understanding of words. Definitions, then, are very much shaped by social, cultural, and personal perspectives as well as by one’s purposes for defining and the audience for whom the definition is intended. Unlike general dictionaries, specialized dictionaries and encyclopedias stipulate how the word/term is used by a particular group of individuals. The definition, in other words, has been constructed to fit the perspective and interests of that group. You can also stipulate a definition based on your own experiences with the term, perhaps a personal experience or observation(s) of and from others. 

 

Task:  In this assignment, you are going to stipulate a definition for one of the following related terms—“literacy,” “education,” “school,” “schooling,” “reading,” “writing.” Think of your audience as concerned parents and school administrators. Your goal is help them understand what the term means according to authorized sources (dictionaries etc) but also to you as someone who has been “schooled” in the literate practices you believe are important to success in life. You’ll start with a dictionary definition and then expand with additional definitions from other sources as relevant. You’ll illustrate the definition(s) you stipulate with your own narrative(s) and, if you wish, with observations of and from others.

 

What You’ll Learn: The importance of choosing and using words carefully; how and when to use tertiary sources, including specialized dictionaries and encyclopedias; the difference between scholarly and popular (Wikipedia) references; how to construct an argument appropriate to a specific audience; how to introduce and incorporate information from multiple sources, including your own lived experience and/or observations, in support of your argument.

 

Nuts and bolts: Minimum 900 words, 12-point font, double-spaced:  Draft due:    Final paper due: 

Must include definitions from at least two tertiary sources, introduced and cited correctly according to MLA, APA, or the Chicago Manual of Style. Other sources are optional.

Final paper will include an appropriate title, an abstract (brief summary), and a works cited page. Optional: Feel free to include visuals, e.g. screen shots, IM print-outs, photos, images from old textbooks, and so on. Just be sure to credit the source. See StM Chapter 4 for advice.