Mason Topics: The Global Village

English 101: Introductory Composition

Linked to History 100: Western Civilization

Fall 2004

Dr. Terry Myers Zawacki 
tzawacki@gmu.edu

Office: RA 112a                 Office Hours: W 10:30-11:30 and by appt.     Phone: 993-1187

Engl 101-MT4: MW 3:00-4:15  Robinson  A245

English 101 is designed to prepare you for college writing and thinking with an emphasis on developing critical strategies for working with texts, including the lived "text" of everyday experience, and a habit of self-consciousness about your own and your peers’ thinking and writing. Course goals also include helping you to understand how audience and purpose shape writing, how to use writing as a learning tool, and how to write effective and interesting prose. Two principles are central to this course. First, we will assume that writing is not a mere transcript of thoughts one has already worked out, but rather a way of discovering and transforming one's thoughts. Second, we will consider revision as a long-term process of fundamentally challenging and developing writing.

I value risk-taking and challenge you to think in ways that go beyond the "tried and true." Nothing, not even papers flawed by mistakes, is worse than boring writing.

This class is linked with Dr.Kelly’s History 100, which means that much of our writing will be framed by historical concerns and methods.  In addition, we’ll be work with many of the same readings you’ll use in History 100.

Required Texts:

Lunsford, A. The St. Martin’s Handbook 5. (StM) (www.bedfordstmartins.com/smhandbook)

We won’t be covering all of the information in this handbook, so, as you encounter writing assignments in other classes, you may find helpful the specialized chapters The St. Martin’s Handbook offers on “Document Design” (chapter 8), “Oral and Multimedia Presentations” (chapter 10), “Considering Visual Arguments” (chapter 256), and all of the chapters in Part 12 “Academic and Professional Writing,” which give advice on researching and writing in the disciplines. In addition, the handbook is a good resource for work on sentence structure, grammar, punctuation, and mechanics.    

George Mason Review (pick up in bookstore)  

Packet of readings to be purchased

Course Procedures:

· Course notebook—You’ll need a set of pocket folders and/or a binder for free writing, notes, and reading log entries. In your log, you’ll analyze what you’ve read and make connections to other readings, to personal experiences, and to what we’ve discussed in class.

· Finished Papers—You’ll write five papers. Five papers may not sound like many to write in fifteen weeks, but you’ll see that each paper requires a great deal of processing and research, both primary and secondary.   We have designed paper assignments so that they build on one another; this means that each topic should inform the next. Important: Keep all drafts that demonstrate significant revision.

             Writing assignment One: Summary of article TBA. 350-500 words. (5%)  Dual Submission

Writing Assignment Two: One Writer’s Beginning (in “blog” format). # of words will vary. (20%) Note: this assignment will be done in two parts--a core story and researched hypertext links--at two different points in the semester. 

Writing Assignment Three:  Focused Annotated Bibliography. 6 sources minimum (1800-2000 words)  Dual Submission (20%)

 Writing Assignment Four:  Synthesis of History 100 Weblog Entries (10%)  (900-1000 words)

            Writing Assignment Five:  Final Essay. 1500-2000 words. (20%) Dual submission.

· Participation—English 101 is a workshop course, so I do little lecturing. Instead you’ll be working with each other in pairs, in groups, and in larger group discussions. Attendance and active participation are very important. (25% of final grade)

· Grading—Your final grade will be based on your achieving the course goals, with particular emphasis on your ability to write interesting and technically correct essays supported by primary and/or secondary research, and your thoughtful and regular participation. Approximate percentages are: essays and all accompanying work = 75%; other work (reading logs, Mason Topics events and accompanying logs, in-class writing, contributions to class discussion, etc) = 25%. Because the re-visioning process is so central to this course, you will have the opportunity to revise three of your writing assignments after a grade has been assigned, either one week after you receive your grade or in a final portfolio. You will earn the an average of the two grades. Note on final grade: You must achieve at least a "C" grade in order to receive credit for the course. If your work is not at least a "C" average (not a “C-“), you will earn an NC, which means No Credit and which does not affect your GPA. You will then be required to repeat English 101.

· Late Papers: Papers are due at the beginning of the class period and automatically forfeit one-letter grade for each class period they are late. This includes papers put in my mailbox in lieu of your attending class. Generally I do not accept an assignment once I have returned papers to the other students. Late papers may not be revised. I will not accept a paper if I have not seen it through the drafting stages. In no case will I accept a paper handed in with the explanation that you changed your topic at the last minute because you could not find enough information on the topic you had been working on.

Other Important Policies:

Accommodations for Students with Disabilities: Students with documented disabilities are legally entitled to certain accommodations in the classroom.  If you have a documented disability, please give me your faculty contact sheet from the Disability Resources Center. If you do not yet have a contact sheet, please visit the Disability Resource Center in SUB I.  993-2474.

 

Plagiarism:

Plagiarism means using the exact words, opinions, or factual information from another source without giving that source credit. Writers give credit through the use of accepted documentation styles, such as parenthetical citation, footnotes, or end notes; a simple listing of books, articles, and websites is not sufficient.  Plagiarism is the equivalent of intellectual robbery and cannot be tolerated in an academic setting.

 

Student writers are often confused as to what should be cited. Some think that only direct quotations need to be credited. While direct quotations do need citations, so do paraphrases and summaries of opinions or factual information formerly unknown to the writers or which the writers did not discover themselves.  Exceptions to this include factual information which can be obtained from a variety of sources, the writers' own insights or findings from their own field research, (what has been called common knowledge). What constitutes common knowledge can sometimes be precarious; what is common knowledge for one audience may be so for another. In such situations, it is helpful to keep the reader in mind and to think of citations as being "reader friendly." In other words, writers provide a citation for any piece of information that they think their readers might want to investigate further. Not only is this attitude considerate of readers, it will almost certainly ensure that writers will not be guilty of plagiarism.

The George Mason Honor Code offers more detail on plagiarism and its consequences: http://www.gmu.edu/org/honorcouncil/guidelines.htm

 

 

Midterm Grades: 

In ENGL 100, ENGL 101 and ENGL 200s, students receive a midterm letter grad based on the work of the first seven weeks of the course. The purpose of this grade is to help students find out how well they are doing in the first half of the course in order to make any adjustments necessary for success in the course as a whole. Instructors calculate letter grades based on the completed course assignments as weighted on the syllabus through the seventh week. The work in the second half of the semester may be weighted more heavily, and so the midterm grade is not meant to predict the final course grade. Students may view their grade online through Patriot Web.

 

Sharing Your Work in Class:

I use students’ papers and passages from papers as positive models. Please let me know if you would not like a particular piece of writing to be used as a model. Please know, however, that you’ll be asked to share all of your writing for this class with your peers in small groups or reviews of drafts.

  

Useful URL’s
How to set up your own webpage:

http://www.gmu.edu/mlnavbar/webdev/masonclusterweb.html
and/or
http://mason.gmu.edu/%7Emontecin/create9.htm
STAR Lab Workshop Schedule (for help on creating a webpage):
http://media.gmu.edu/workshops/default.cfm


University Writing Center (with tons of on-line handouts and advice) – http://writingcenter.gmu.edu

GMU Libraries -- http://www.gmu.edu/libresearch/

 An array of useful research and ‘how to’ sites:
http://mason.gmu.edu/~montecin/resources.htm

English Composition Program Resources for Students:
 http://www.gmu.edu/departments/english/composition/students/links.html

Mason Topics Program: http://masontopics.gmu.edu


Tentative Weekly Progression

Note: All reading assignments come from St. Martin’s Handbook unless otherwise noted.

Week One

·         8/30: Overview of course, introductions, in-class writing on names. 

·         9/1:  In-class primary research exercise (using name stories).  Assignment: Read StM Intro 1-25. You’ll be keeping a writing log similar to the one described in these pages.

Week Two

·         9/6: Labor Day Holiday

·         9/8: Practice paraphrasing and synthesizing using the quotes below. Read: StM Chapter One “Reading, Writing, and Research” and StM 367-76, 387-89, 394-400. Take notes on the meaning of synthesis, paraphrasing and summarizing. 

“Increasingly, Americans are a people without history, with only memory, which means a people poorly prepared for what is inevitable about life—tragedy, sadness, moral ambiguity—and, therefore, a people reluctant to engage difficult ethical issues. Consumer culture is mostly about denial, about forgetting the past, except insofar as the past is pleasant and, thus, marketable. As historians, we occupy one tiny space where the richness of the past is kept alive, where its complexity is acknowledged and studied, where competing voices can still be heard. One of the most important things historians do is to bear witness to the past, including its horrors, in order to battle the amnesia that would sweep away all this is difficult or repugnant. The distinction between history and memory—that is, the distinction between knowledge of painful things, painfully arrived at, and notions of the past that flatter us with easy myths or cheap emotions—is at the heart of our enterprise.” –Elliott J. Gorn

“Memoir must be written because each of us must have a created version of the past. Created: that is, real, tangible, made of the stuff of a life lived in place and in history. And the down side of any created thing as well: we must live with a version that attaches us to our limitations, to the inevitable subjectivity, of our points of view. We must acquiesce to our experience and our gift to transform experience into meaning and value. You tell me your story, I’ll tell you my story.  … If we refuse to do the work of creating this personal version of the past, someone else will do it for us. This is a  scary political fact. “  Patricia Hampl  

Week Three


 Week Four

·         9/20:  Meet in computer room (place TBA). Assignment One Summary Due. We’ll also discuss Writing Assignment Two “One Writer’s Beginning” and look at “Bystory,” a “Mystory” webpage by Byron Hawk at: http://mason.gmu.edu/~bhawk/bystory/bystory.html.  You’ll see that Hawk has a “core story” and digressive links to explain his key terms, just as you will. This week you’ll work on your core story; later you’ll work on your researched (digressive) links.

·         9/22: Discussion of “Memory and Imagination.” (Handed out in class.) Take notes in reading log of her main argument and how she organizes the essay digressively to support that argument. Be thinking about your writing assignment “One Writer’s Beginning” and what kinds of digressions you may want to take. We’ll talk further about “Bystory” and Hawk’s digressions later in Week Twelve.  

Week Five

·         9/27: Read: selections from Eurdora Welty’s memoir One Writer’s Beginning and Richard Rodriguez’ memoir Hunger of Memory.Also read student Mary Gonnelli’s “Writing My ‘Memory Drawer’.” All are in packet. In log: Take notes in log of how their stories are organized, the details each includes, and of any ideas you get for your own story. Free write about your experiences as readers and writers: What’s your first memory? What’s your best memory? What’s interested you and, perhaps, helped you become a college student? All time favorite books? What books are on your personal bookshelves? The best thing you’ve ever written? Next you’ll consider what larger contexts and/or theories about cultural values and social practices (e.g. family/community literacy, education, what it means to be “civilized,” the “classics”) your stories might reflect?

·        9/29: Discussion of free writing and themes that occur in your stories of your writer’s beginnings.  The different values of digressive and focused writing.

Week Six

·        10/4: Draft of core story for mystory webpage “One Writer’s Beginnings” due. Read: StM on “Developing Paragraphs” pp 113-138.

·        10/6: Mystory “core story”--“One Writer’s Beginnings”--due (on blog or wepage). Meet in computer lab.

Week Seven

Note: Columbus Day Holiday is Oct 11 so we meet on Tuesday, October 12, instead of Monday.  Classes that regularly meet on Tuesday do not meet this Tuesday.

·         10/12: Discussion of Writing Assignment Three: Annotated Bibliography, which will emphasize researching and using your research to address a very focused question. (Research always begins with a question.” Read: StM Chapter 14: “Preparing for Research.” Note especially pp 315-17 on annotating sources. Both prepare you for assignment three.

·        10/13: Focusing your research question. Read: “Chapter 19 “Writing a Research Project” for advice on how to focus and organize your research, pp 403-407. We’ll also visit Fenwick Library.

Week Eight

October 17 – Trip to National Gallery of Art

·        10/18 – 10/20: Conferences on research and annotations. No formal class meeting.

Prepare for conference: Bring draft of paper three. Read: StM Chapter 16 “Evaluating Sources and Taking Notes”; Chapter 18 “Acknowledging Sources and Avoiding Plagiarism”; Documenting Sources: Survey documentation/citation styles Chapters 20-23 and review carefully Chapter 23 on Chicago documentation, which is what you’ll use for this assignment.

Week Nine

·        10/25: Writing Assignment Three: Annotated Bibliography Due. Bring: photograph from your, your family’s, or your community’s past. We’ll work with these in class, drawing on your experience in the National Gallery.

·         10/27: Synthesizing opinions on an historical issue: writing assignment four. Be prepared to discuss the web log entries your peers have been making in your history class. You’ll report on, synthesize and evaluate peers’ web log entries to inform your English 101 teachers about discussions in History 100.

Week Ten

·         11/1: Read: StM Chapter Two “Considering Rhetorical Situations” and Chapter 17 “Integrating Sources” pp 380-389. Review Chapter 16, pp 367-8.     

·         11/3:  Draft of writing assignment four due. 

Week Eleven

·        11/8:  Writing Assignment Four Due. 

·         11/10: We now return to “One Writer’s Beginnings,” your “mystory” webpage. You’ll research at least three of the key words from your core story. Begin mapping your core story  to determine what key words you want to research. See also StM pp 192-201 on writing for the web.

To practice finding definitions, work with one of these key words related to assignment two: “memory,” “diary,” “journal,” “log,” “blog,” “history,” “autobiography,” “memoir.” You may decide to use one of these terms as a key word for a hypertext link. Review: StM Chapter 15 “Conducting Research.” Note what is meant by primary, secondary, and tertiary sources. Bring: definition of one of the key words above. Directions: before class, visit the Fenwick Library reference room and consult a specialized encyclopedia to find the meaning of one of the key words above. You may also begin looking for other key words of interest to you. See StM pp 897-900 for lists of encyclopedias and/or ask the reference librarian and/or look at http://library.gmu.edu/research/handouts.html on general research guides. Write down a full bibliographic entry in MLA or Chicago format for the encyclopedia and a summary of the discussion of the word.

Week Twelve

·         11/15: Reread Byron Hawk’s “Bystory.” Bring a hard copy draft of your core story and your three links. Revise core story as desired. Draft should clearly indicate links.

·         11/17: Mystory webpage with links due.  Meet in computer room (TBA) to read and comment on “mystory.”

 

** November 20 – Trip to Holocaust Museum **

 Week Thirteen

·         11/22: Begin work on final essay. Review: StM Chapter Three “Exploring, Planning, and Drafting,” pp 57-75; Chapter Eleven “Analyzing Arguments”; “Chapter Thirteen “Constructing Arguments,” pp 264-86. 

·         11/24: Thanksgiving Holiday

Week Fourteen

·          11/29: Draft of Paper Five due  

·          12/1:  Final Essay Due

Week Fifteen:

·         12/6:  Review and optional revisions of assignments 1-4. Note: You may revise two assignments. If you choose to revise, you will include a Writer’s Memo explaining what you revised and why. You will need to persuade me that you made substantive revisions that merit my rereading your assignment. The two grades will be averaged.  

·         12/8:  Optional revisions due and Last Writes.

Note: There will be no final exam in this class.

 

What Final Grades Mean

A = work far exceeds minimum requirements, shows initiative, originality, intelligence, and well developed critical thinking and writing skills.

B = work exceeds minimum requirements, shows high quality critical thinking and writing skills.

C = work meets minimum requirements, shows effort and progress.

NC = work shows lack of basic skills and critical thinking. Writer did not adequately meet the goals and requirements for the course.

 Format for papers: Name and date in top right corner.  No cover sheet or folder of any kind.  Please staple your paper together.  Give paper a title. Double space.  Proofread carefully. Make last minute corrections, if necessary, with black ink.